crystaleticity

A measure of how well I can follow a tutorial I suppose. thank you to those who posted the tutorials here and on wasted youth. I still dont know how to use Photoshop, but with every tutorial I get a little more familiar with the tools. The only thing about the tutorials, some of the steps are missing, which assumes the person already has a familiarity with all the functions. a small detail, given the intuitive interface, but sometimes frustrating in the meantime. not a gripe, just a fact.
feedback on this first attempted cliche of a piece are welcome